Don’t think you’ll be with me forever!
Don’t think I’ll always be your sweet lover!
I’m not an angel undercover
I’m just a damn bloody lover
I can be cold
I can be bold
I can be gross
As worse as it could get
And that’s not a shy threat
Cause I’m just a bloody lover!
Try and make me jealous
And I’ll be bloody monstrous,
Atrocious,
And scandalous!
If you can’t handle my womanly sensitivity,
Then you don’t deserve my wanton creativity!
Don’t act like Mr. Innocent!
Don’t be so arrogantly confident…
You’re just another guy of intellect!
You’re always offline!
Or busy online!
You don’t have time!
Except when you’re gambling with my feeling
Well baby it’ll make me hit the regret ceiling!
Please, control your geeky manipulation
I’m sick of your mercury swingy situation!
‘Cause it’s no good for my feminine inflation!
And it’ll surly take me to the bye-bye station!
I’m not an angel undercover!
I’m just a damn bloody lover!
I can be cold!
I can be bold!
I can be gross!
As worse as it could get
And that’s not a shy threat
Cause I’m just a bloody lover!
Friday, September 9, 2011
Ruthless and witty, spooky and to the point. Nicely written, poor invader he’s gonna get slaughtered!
Thank you so much for your comment, Mamdooh!
I’m flattered 🙂
Awesome! simple and stylish, stick with subject from opening to end. but can you just aviod using a slung words! (BLOODY).
don’t mind HAAAAN………
Again; very nice 🙂
Thanks a lot, George! 🙂
A little Harsh, But I loved it
So emotions in it .. Keep it up
@Hind Mousa
Harsh only on paper my dear 🙂
Thanks a lot for your comment! Glad you liked it 🙂
hahaha that’s brilliant!!
I can feel the frustration behind the words. Well written.
@Laylah
Thank you so much…”he” liked it too and made it up for me 😛
Is that you in real?
What do you mean?
i can only say msh2lah
find a guitar and you can sing it, like Avril lavigne. haha
Nice poem anyways..
Truthfully speaking, this piece sparks excitement to the reader. The complexity of our being comes out here. Very much liked it and the strength it reflects on your pen. Thank you