Eye for an Eye

Posted: September 29, 2009 in My Poems


Eye for an Eye!

He pats her with his fingertips.

She soothes him with velvet lips.

He gives less, she gives more;

These are the terms of their relationship.

She takes him to the shore …

He yearns for sailing on a new trip,

Willing to drown with a whore.

This is only and simply being fair

In Adam’s perfect particular law.

So let us not feel depressed or in despair

When Eve gives love while Adam makes her a snare,

Or when she faithfully crowns him with mild care,

While he snatches her back with deception’s claws,

Cause this is only a minor flaw in Adam’s perfect law.


Friday, September 19, 2003


  1. iman says:

    This poem is absolutely devine! It really tugged at my heart-strings. Good on you, keep it up 🙂

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