Evoking from the darkness of chains,
A wild mild feminine beast.
Her young entity snatched by serenity,
Yet she soars uncaring for any blame!
She’s a shining sun burning from within
Suppressed by the laws of a thousand galaxy…
Hysterically driven by the bonds of reason,
Used and thrown by the natural egoism of men!
No more walls she wants;
No more care she needs
Away from love’s worn out pleas…
She travels on a journey into the self!
Flowing out from the womb of shame
Laughing, crying, seducing, torturing;
She cannot be but herself…
She cannot be but a woman of flames!
Friday, August 6, 2005
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This poem envoked the feelings of the writer very poignantly! I enjoyed reading this
Very powerful! I like!
lol weird way of looking at women .its like the thinkn of old ages or really from place wehre peopel see females as different being and strange ,,, grow up writer
@aseft
I think you haven’t realized that I am a woman! So what I write expresses (MY) feelings and it’s not a way of looking at women…
And I am sorry if you cannot understand nor appreciate poetry… obviously you have a scientific mind
Well, I am aware that you are a female and have seen you in a pic.
After reading your every day chores ( in your of a typical day of yours) where you spread your love and care and look after your family and your self .
Now here you still feel left alone and sad “Suppressed by the laws of a thousand galaxy…” (does this mean you are not satisfied by your life as an arab female? Dont know what else you are looking for ) .
Well that was beautiful way of expressing your self Maha but …
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why females dont find themselves complete ? Is it their femenine nature? I guess its a Universal phenomenon that women are not satisfied with what they are and how they are ?
I guess the women are treated very well in arab world .at least in saudi arabia..1. because of the ayah ..Rejoice at the birth of your female child ..2 . i heard the dowry (Mher) is so high that many saudis are unable to give and are not married .. as they cant afford it (saudi girls are brought up lavishly )… and women have a nice place here .. dunno if I am correct .. I read this in some article …
well a scienticfic brain lol.. may be , i am an engineer;)
Does arabic litereture portray women like the way you did? Why is she burning?
I am not portraying women..I am just expressing my feelings…and she’s not burning!
You have very poor understanding of poetry..sorry :/
Dont flames burn? hhmm may be this is the way of expressing .. any thing that rocks your boat dear:)
Omg the lady in the pic isnt wearing a hijab .. Mutawwas on thier way